Introduction to The Battle of Losing Weight

The second piece I chose was about the battle of losing weight which I wrote about 7 weeks into the quarter. I liked this piece because it’s a battle that’s still going on for me even though I’ve lost 30 pounds. It shows my ability to write effectively because it outlines the process of losing weight. As shown here” Another extremely important component of weight loss is diet. Cut down your bad carbohydrates which are pasta, flower, sugars, and white rice. Soda and juice contain many calories so absolutely limit them or cut them out of your diet completely. Aim to lose weight slowly so that your loss is permanent.”